Lies, Secrets,Drama and confusion..
I like how you write relatably but also still fairly grammatically correct. Sure there are a couple things here and there, but nothing a quick edit couldn't fix, and that's only if you wanted to fix em.
I think the intro could be a little bit longer and hook the reader in more.
Keep writing :)
Your writing is very convincing and true to life. I think lots of young people will relate to this. Nice work