Walking Death

Walking Death

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Orlando By kind69 Updated May 19, 2010

unnamed projec,t please give me feedback, should i make the narrative more simple or more detailed? also give some ideas for names, if things go good i will upload next part soon and then once i finish this prologue the real story will start

In the middle of a hot summer night, a forty-ish man stepped inside his suburban house, while gasping for air he closed the door with all three locks, thing that he have never done before, considering the safety of his neighborhood, once is breath was calmed he started pushing a shelf book right behind the door," that shall keep them at bay" he foolishly thought, little did he know the creatures he was facing, came form hell it self. Awakened by the noise that the man did, a slightly younger woman came down the stairs, she was wearing a nightgown that let in evidence the silhouette of her body, she was in shape but not a perfect body per se.

-What's going on?-she asked her husband, puzzled by the improvised barricade, without saying a word or min...