Before you exit out I know it seems a little unoriginal in the begining but please keep reading! VOTE AND COMMENT AND WHATNOT!! PLZ :]
wtf was that mind control junk creepyy :OOO
Does that mean they're all liek vampires or something im guesiing off the title her dogg so yah this is awesome pls upload C:
btw, I'd avoid reciting poems/songs. Maybe say a line or two, and write what the person is thinking as they recite them. Or, if someone besides the main character is reciting, then write what your character is thinking. But otherwise....
The beginning is a lot better than my first one, so rock on!
I like it, but it started off a little slow. The grammar was actually pretty good, compared to what I've seen before. I love that you actually used capitalization AND punctuation! Whoop! ~~Alex
That is epic!!!!
:D Keep writing!!!
I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
i love it. i thought it was so cute.i love the poems too i decided to read them in a british accent. i cant spell lol