The Path of Fire (Path of Light and Fire Book #1)

The Path of Fire (Path of Light and Fire Book #1)

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R. McNeary By rmcneary Completed

Thief. Murderer. Mage. Prince. Warrior.
  
Heroes.
  
16 year-old Sabin's plans to join the army change when he learns he is a Serien - a warrior who wields an element. With a sentient sword, he must find the other Seriens.  His goal: unite them into a force capable of defending humanity from the Guan, a humanoid race believed to be extinct.
  
His charges are a belligerent thief, sarcastic assassin, adorable mage and arrogant prince.  Each with their own agenda.
  
Stand together or die alone.
  
The hero price is never fair.
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Book 1 of the Path of Light and Fire series.
Book 2 - "Dragon & Phoenix" updates every Thursday.
  
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The Appendix is located at the end and answers some frequently asked questions.  It is not needed to enjoy the novel.

elaroadshow elaroadshow Jul 26
You need a little world building here. I am guessing "a cycle" is a month, but why make your reader guess? So I might say, "...except for the few days at the Acadian Tournament in Covica last year. But this wouldn't be for a few days or even a moon cycle or two."
elaroadshow elaroadshow Jul 26
I'd add a dialogue tag here:  ...Rosera," Okkai said, as he calmly...
Is the person on the cover originally from assassin's creed?
AJSCURRAH AJSCURRAH Sep 07
That's the way I view most antagonists! Aegis is my spirit character, I swear
RhowieLhei RhowieLhei Nov 16
Hmm first I saw Sensei. Now Katana. HMMM I FEEL LIKE IM GONNA LIKE THIS BOOK
KY9029 KY9029 Nov 30
As in there's no walls or anything just the road is known as "the gate?"