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Battleship Unity

Battleship Unity

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etinks By etinks Completed

Book one of the Unity series

It has taken countless years and billions of lives, but the Earth has finally achieved a tentative peace. Ruled by a group known as The Council, humanity tries to return to everyday life. To help keep the peace, The Council has ordered the creation of the Battle Fleet. Since the announcement Jack Ryan has prepared himself to join. Things quickly spiral out of control for Jack as he discovers an ancient enemy, bent on destruction. The galaxy is on the brink of destruction and its up to Jack and the Battle Fleet to save it.

Special thanks to RMPacheco for the awesome cover.

According to my limited knowledge of laws of warfare they cannot anything that can cause radiation in a populated location but the laws could have changed so don't know about that
ed2wfu ed2wfu Nov 21, 2015
Superlative writing skills. I would like more, more! I really want to find out what happens next! Incredible work.
Amy_DuBoff Amy_DuBoff Jun 26, 2015
This is a good backstory for a series. But, I'm with @shalonsims--there's a way to present this information without it being straight exposition. I'd recommend cutting the Prologue and weaving in some mention of these events in the first few chapters of the book instead.
DanteShadowEater DanteShadowEater May 20, 2015
Wow, impressive writing. I like the chain of events you so nicely pieced together. And your vocabulary complements your plot. Good job!
etinks etinks Apr 01, 2015
@KSAvard thanks. I'm more than happy to check out your work, but in the future, pm me instead of commenting in my book.
KSAvard KSAvard Apr 01, 2015
Very interesting start. Definitely holds a lot of promise.
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