Imalroc

Imalroc

64.7K Reads 6.2K Votes 51 Part Story
smaoineamh By smaoineamh Completed

In the brutal world of battleboxing, Imalroc sacrificed years to become an unbeatable champion. But his will to fight vanishes when he learns that he will never earn his freedom from the deadly sport, and he begins his own private rebellion against his masters. When his contract passes into the hands of the Toriem cousins, Imalroc discovers an unlikely path to freedom. The longer he is owned by the cousins, the further he is drawn into the web of secrets, politics and seduction that surround the Toriems and the dangerous powers closing in upon them. And as the stakes rise, Imalroc is faced with the realization that while his desperate drive for freedom has kept him alive, the price for breaking out of the battlebox forever might destroy him.



AUTHOR'S NOTE: Hello again people! It's been a while, but I am finally back with a story I'm so excited to share. To those of you who read Beginnings, I want to say that this is a much darker, more complicated and distinctly different kind of story, but please give it a try! I do want to note however that it has a lot more depictions of violence and sex, because of the world in which it is set. I love these characters and I'm so happy to finally be introducing them to all of you. I hope you enjoy it. And please comment! I love feedback! It really helps me stay motivated to continue writing. Thank you for reading and supporting my writing!

forNarnia19 forNarnia19 4 days ago
You are such a talented writer! You use such descriptive yet meaningful words and they really bring an image to my mind. It makes me feel like I'm there watching all of this happen. Keep up the great work!
AmericanBruja AmericanBruja 3 days ago
 #WLBC 👍🏾here we see Vonnegut's rule of storytelling met, to lay out the conflict in the first chapter, along with the admonition, "every character must want something" (of they're wasting space doncha know😁).
it makes me sad that they're talking about a human like he's a horse
veronica-h veronica-h Jul 11
 #BlankSheets This paragraph is a little too long. Break it into two or three.
veronica-h veronica-h Jul 11
Good amount of detailing here. It's easy to imagine the character. The Duke is also well described. I like how you've put the story so far.
AmericanBruja AmericanBruja 3 days ago
 #WLBC you prolly don't need the bit after the comma (in the sentence). The first part of the sentence tells us he's controlling himself.