Imalroc

Imalroc

89.1K Reads 7.9K Votes 57 Part Story
smaoineamh By smaoineamh Completed

In the brutal world of battleboxing, Imalroc sacrificed years to become an unbeatable champion. But his will to fight vanishes when he learns that he will never earn his freedom from the deadly sport, and he begins his own private rebellion against his masters. When his contract passes into the hands of the Toriem cousins, Imalroc discovers an unlikely path to freedom. The longer he is owned by the cousins, the further he is drawn into the web of secrets, politics and seduction that surround the Toriems and the dangerous powers closing in upon them. And as the stakes rise, Imalroc is faced with the realization that while his desperate drive for freedom has kept him alive, the price for breaking out of the battlebox forever might destroy him.



AUTHOR'S NOTE: Hello again people! It's been a while, but I am finally back with a story I'm so excited to share. To those of you who read Beginnings, I want to say that this is a much darker, more complicated and distinctly different kind of story, but please give it a try! I do want to note however that it has a lot more depictions of violence and sex, because of the world in which it is set. I love these characters and I'm so happy to finally be introducing them to all of you. I hope you enjoy it. And please comment! I love feedback! It really helps me stay motivated to continue writing. Thank you for reading and supporting my writing!

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Gunnaboo Gunnaboo Nov 17, 2017
Well shoot it’s the third paragraph and you already have me hooked. Love your diction choice and the figurative language is giving me heart palpitations. The imagery really transports me to the scene. Love it!!!
gme1204 gme1204 Jan 02
The line, “His third visit, and this time it was part of his plan.” Could be rewritten to make it a little clearer- “This was his third visit, and this time it was part of his plan.”
-kittyqueen -kittyqueen Nov 01, 2017
I think this could be the end of the chapter. The length is quite long, and may be daunting to some.
fluffymints fluffymints Dec 03, 2017
Ah, the pieces are starting to fix together and play out. Goodie good.
                              
                              @Court-Of-Etiquette
fluffymints fluffymints Dec 03, 2017
Exactly, something is better than nothing. And, on a side note, the chapter is dreadfully long.
fluffymints fluffymints Dec 02, 2017
Oh, you know, just about get sold off again. I'm fine really, best day of my life.