My first piece of literature on WATTPAD!!! And also my entry for the Attys! I would love some support!
It's quite the piece. It has a complex angle with this haunting feeling that just gets you thinking... You've got a lot of detail, wonderful word-choice, and the lines hit you with a power. Those last lines, -- oh my god -- those last lines were simply a-ma-zing!!
                                    Kudos, this is a brilliant poem!
Interesting! This is so unique and original, I loved it. 
                                    Good luck in the Atty's!
This is absolutely compelling! I would love to know your thoughts behind writing it :) Voted!
this is really good, makes me think. I wish you luck in the Atty's. I'm competing myself.