Insurmountable

Insurmountable

22K Reads 474 Votes 17 Part Story
Al By crazy_waffle Updated Jun 18, 2012

Scar was genetically enhanced to be indestructible. She can run four times faster than a regular human being. She has perfect vision in the dark. She can summon lightning from her fingertips with a snap. She was insurmountable. She was designed to protect mankind from any threat. But instead, she became the one threatening the human race. When she escaped from the scientists who created her, hundreds of people wanted to kill Scar. But she could fight them off easily like squashing a bug. Literally. But things go wrong when she meets a boy who was stronger than she was.

  • action
  • apples
  • blahblahblah
  • camille
  • carlie
  • creator
  • dontknowwhattodo
  • ethan
  • extra
  • fans
  • harry
  • hello
  • humor
  • hundred
  • idontknow
  • insurmountable
  • jake
  • lab
  • ladidadida
  • mia
  • monkey
  • nikki
  • patrick
  • police
  • policemen
  • potter
  • random
  • robert
  • scar
  • scarlett
  • scientists
  • ugh
  • weatherford
  • whattotag
  • whoo
  • whyareyouread
Nonbeliever Nonbeliever Jul 11, 2011
It's really good so far, just one thing? I noticed once or twice you moved between past and present tense like in that last paragraph you put "can" when it should have been "could". Apart from that it's really interesting :D *voted*
Nerali Nerali Jul 11, 2011
just........wow. CONGRATS COMRADDEE ON BEING SUCH A GOOD WRITER!! :D
Scattered_Roses Scattered_Roses Jul 03, 2011
The story line is great and it's very interesting to read! :) Creative too! *Voted
fallingfromheaven fallingfromheaven Jun 28, 2011
I like this story I'm voting, liking, and putting it in my library.
danielletampuss danielletampuss Jun 28, 2011
I love the start of your story. :D
                              
                              ..but, I think [and it's just my opinion, so it's alright if you don't take it] you just dropped loads of information and I feel that some of your sentences should be together in one or something like that. x]
                              
                              ..but other than that, great job! I loved it! :D
babylou0808 babylou0808 Jun 28, 2011
Very interesting plot. I really like this chapter. :) Voted..