The Outlaw's Secret

The Outlaw's Secret

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Cassandra Dont-you-wish-you-knew By Antebellum_Lady Updated Mar 29, 2011

Kania was you average sixteen year old in 1870. until that fateful day.....
Kania was totally annoyed to be captured by outlaws.No, she wasn't really scared she was annoyed. this girl is completely fearless, well, so they think. At first, she totally loathed them, but as time went on, she realized that they too had morals.No hurting Women, no stealing from Orphans or widows. they had their own law. And slowly she noticed herself  becoming one of them! Not only that, but she was one of the most feared......until she meets up with Jesse, the most dangerous outlaw out there. She wasn't quite sure what to think of him. He knew what to think of her though. A Conquest. read on to find out what happens.........Then they have a Murderer on the loose, killing people and animals left and right, with no mercy. Most people pass it off as a rabid animal, but Kania, Jason and Jesse don't think so..........

PixieKari PixieKari Feb 08, 2012
By his language, Fleur is not French, he is Creole and probably came west from New Orleans or somewhere in rural Louisiana.  Just a little something I picked up in high school from my French teacher (who came to the US after WWII as a war-Bride. Oops giving my age away)
MagicPineapples MagicPineapples Apr 04, 2011
Really original. Stay away from the predictable. Great start!
MagicPineapples MagicPineapples Apr 04, 2011
Interesting beginning. Really good job :) You have some original ideas.
EvelynLyuba EvelynLyuba Mar 29, 2011
So far it's pretty good! And awww, you used the name Jason. Good choice, lol. :)