Be my Queen ✔

Be my Queen ✔

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Annie M. By randomthingsbyme Completed

Priscilla. An intelligent and obedient daughter of one of the most prominent couple in Edinburgh.Only focused in her goals in life, she never bothered to look for a boyfriend. No one has ever made her think twice about it anyway.

Enter Stephen. Every woman's ideal man. Tall, handsome, smart, athletic, a complete gentleman and of course, a prince.

When their parents decided for them to get married for the benefit of the kingdom and their parent's happiness, will they achieve the happiness both of them deserve?

What if an accident would set them both free? Will they find their true love? Or is fate just trying to mess up with them?
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passionforwriting96 passionforwriting96 Mar 04, 2015
I like where this is going. I only spotted a few minor errors; like calling the father her, but really it was good. I'm sure to keep reading. Especially with that nice cliffhanger at the end! Can't wait to see where this goes!
SimplyFashionista_ SimplyFashionista_ Mar 04, 2015
Now this seems really interesting. and cliffhanger just makes me want to read more I can't wait to see her reaction and what she says!
MaddyHxxxx MaddyHxxxx Feb 28, 2015
It's a really nice founded prologue and it seems a cool story also.
                               The prologue is a tad bit short though. The cliffhanger is really well-founded though! It leaves us wondering what will happen and if it will have something to do with the title! I like your writing style!
marsy7 marsy7 Feb 20, 2015
I love the way you have started your prologue, it's interesting and it attracts the reader's attention for sure. I have really enjoyed reading this, I was able to visualize everything. The plot seems pretty intriguing, I have a feeling that this is going to be a very good story!
crownofgold crownofgold Feb 13, 2015
Nice start !! Now I have to totally keep reading to find out what happens lol! I like royal reading to this shall be good.
kjellberg- kjellberg- Jan 20, 2015
Oh wow. This is definitely something so far. I wondering, if he's her uncles son, then wouldn't they be cousins? Eh, that's just my brain. ((I'm hungry, oops.)) I like it so far, bae. This is good!