FOCUS: Hidden Strengths

FOCUS: Hidden Strengths

6.7K Reads 90 Votes 11 Part Story
JoslynneChalese By JoslynneChalese Updated Jun 21, 2011

They never expected to wake up and find themselves on a tropical island. They never expected to suddenly discover supernatural powers. And they certainly never expected that their own natures would lead them to lie, cheat, and kill, or for their little games to turn into something much more sadistic, something that none of them can control. 
 
 What would you do with the power -- and burden -- to eliminate your friends?

JoslynneChalese JoslynneChalese Jan 17, 2012
@nerdything The cover was from Google (lol), but the picture on the side was done by a friend of mine :)
smallartist smallartist Oct 12, 2011
This prologue was nicely done! You need to do a little tweaking here and there but overall, it's great.
JoslynneChalese JoslynneChalese Aug 20, 2011
@Huckleberry13 Thanks! I'm trying my best not to make it cliche! :)
JoslynneChalese JoslynneChalese Aug 18, 2011
@ShannonNicole Okay! Thanks!
                              @Phuk_u Hahaha our schools are weird :)  Thanks for reading!!
VenessaJinson VenessaJinson Aug 03, 2011
Okay, I'm interested!! Great job!!
                              
                              Reading on and voting!! 
                              
                              P.S. there were just a couple punctuation errors.
jules130 jules130 Jul 27, 2011
Nice start! I honestly wasn't expecting to like it as much as I did as I don't usually read books like this. Very Lord of the Flies. Cool!