The Vampire Says Im the Chosen. (RE-EDITTING)

The Vampire Says Im the Chosen. (RE-EDITTING)

36.1K Reads 325 Votes 16 Part Story
Stacey xD By VampirerZz Updated Oct 16, 2010

An average teenage girl. One supernatural being. They're both forced together by destiny. She thinks shes human. He knows shes not. All things normal turns to all things dangerous. Within one day, this teenage girls life is transformed. What really exists..are what can't exist.Her worst nightmares come to life and she is thrown in the deep accient war between The Demons and The Dark Ones. It's not her choice anymore,its fates choice. Love,destiny and betrayal.

You should read everything once typed and check your words. This is the second time that mean has been spelt wrong.
VampirerZz VampirerZz Aug 03, 2010
@MarielAlonzo Thank You soo Much! ;) 
                              and of course , ill check it out soon :D
VampirerZz VampirerZz Jul 18, 2010
Thank you all so much ! :D@iLYUU_95 Ill check out you're story as soon as possible :)
Belle_Henderson Belle_Henderson Jun 14, 2010
Could you please have a kook at my story..? any tips are welcome :))))
alhambra alhambra Jun 11, 2010
I like your story, but you could change a little the beginning. You used the same words `my body` more than 3-4 times in just a few lines. But the rest of the story is really good. 
2sweet 2sweet Jun 11, 2010
Excellent choice of vocabulary
                              for a young writer:)
                              vote;) x