I'm competing in the Poetry awards, come read my poems and support me?
I love how you can play with words and make them turn out really good in a piece. Good job on the imagery! :)
Very powerful and dark. You used imagery very well. Great job
There were some moments of real word beauty in this such as "Lexis of Hate" and "Monster of Manipulation" there is a dark obsession in this that catches the readers breath. I loved the imagery.
@chemicalnoise same! poetry is like word vomit to me, all my deepest feelings just come out :)
@chemicalnoise not at all! I would have thought the same thing two days ago. I'm studying poetry right now before I take a class on it so I don't sound like a complete idiot lol
@chemicalnoise it expresses my thoughts and feelings. It doesn't have to be a song, it can be a sonnet. Granted mine isn't exactly a sonnet but I'm still editing. I'm glad you like it though.