The Unexpected Love

The Unexpected Love

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tessie55 By tessie55 Completed

Something goes wrong with Hermione's time-turner, so now she is stuck in the past until Dumbledore can fix it. She meets new people, makes new friends and finds the love of her life. But what will happen when her time-turner is fixed? What will happen with her love?

OMG I just made a really weird sound and now my whole family is staring at me -~-
I like this, I did see a few mistakes; if you were talking about Severus who bought Hermione to the office, he has Black eyes. "I'm going to go', doesn't sound right; maybe, "I Gotta go' or "I Have to go' ?. I'm still reading, I just wanted to help =)
Maybe not put a , at the end of a 
                              " " ; maybe leave a blank, or a . ?
HogwartsGirl15 HogwartsGirl15 Jul 28, 2015
This is so awesome! I would have ripped the "Marauders" a new one.
tessie55 tessie55 Sep 01, 2012
Thank you, thank you. I have just started writing the next chapter, so I'll upload as soon as I can.
tessie55 tessie55 Aug 25, 2012
I have most of the next chapter done. I will try to upload on Sunday. Thanks for the comments. :) You guys are the best!