The story is about a young girl who looses her dad, her brother and her best friend to an old house.They have been inslaved in torcher and evil magic. Will she get them back or will she get trapped by evil and never see light and the world again.
@MegsLegs yeah that sounds really good. thank youso much for the ideas. I will start writting as soos as i can and i am gooing to dedicate the rest of the story to you for helping me out. If i get stuck on a part later on will you help me oout?(: (:
Yes definatly. You could have some more disappearances and then she tries to solve them. And then when one of her family members disappear she goes and tries to find them. And then when she gets to the heart of the house she finds them all there alive and well but they are slaves to someone.
@MegsLegs Thanks and I might if I can think of anything else I have an idea of what I might do. Do you think I should continue with it ??? (: