FLY AWAY

FLY AWAY

233 Reads 5 Votes 2 Part Story
Gabster By gabster20 Updated Nov 30, 2011

This teenage girl has a BIG secret will she reveal it to you??????

gabster20 gabster20 Nov 30, 2011
I changed the story up how about you read the NEW copy do u like it better then the old copy
gabster20 gabster20 Apr 17, 2011
OVER 100 READS SOOOOOOOO HAPPY :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) 
deathbyink deathbyink Mar 24, 2011
I hope this doesn't come off as harsh, but anyways.  I like the premise, but I think that you could have gone into a little more detail and had it make more sense.  Anyways, can't wait to read more of your writing.  Happy second day on wattpad!