what will you do for someone you loved? what boundaries will you cross? don't say anything. it may ask for everything you love and cherish giving nothing in return.
It's a little hard to follow because of all the typos and grammar problems.
I think you can edit it and fix them all though - writing is all about re-writing! :-)
Oh, and I don't have the time to read the rest of it now, but I added it to my to-read list and will get to it eventually :)
good luck with the story!