My Brother's Best Friend

My Brother's Best Friend

95.6K Reads 2.7K Votes 24 Part Story
Lorraine By cremedelaoreo Completed

Lauren Gray is falling hard for Drew Law.  Covering their secrets and drama from each other, they hope it silently goes away but only more will surface if Lauren chooses to love her brother's best friend.

Djbrowne41 Djbrowne41 May 18
For anyone who is gonna read this story , let me just tell you that it was AMAZING !!!!
ElatedSoul ElatedSoul Oct 25, 2014
It was a nice beginning..My only point of view is that the story could gather more organisation and some intriguing vocabulary..Keep writing :)
wolfbell wolfbell Oct 13, 2014
This story is very intriguing! So far my only point would be to put punctuation in the sentences when people talk.
J_aimee J_aimee Aug 08, 2014
Aww Drew seems so nice and his little sister seems so adorable... Lauren reminds me of me hahaha
- - Aug 08, 2014
Liking the plot already, but i thought maybe to fast about him liking her or whatever, it doesn't matter, keep it up :)
JTLightz JTLightz Aug 01, 2014
Interesting chapter :) The flow could use some, there were a few times you switched tenses and lacked punctuation but other than that I liked it.