Lauren Gray is falling hard for Drew Law. Covering their secrets and drama from each other, they hope it silently goes away but only more will surface if Lauren chooses to love her brother's best friend.
For anyone who is gonna read this story , let me just tell you that it was AMAZING !!!!
It was a nice beginning..My only point of view is that the story could gather more organisation and some intriguing vocabulary..Keep writing :)
This story is very intriguing! So far my only point would be to put punctuation in the sentences when people talk.
Aww Drew seems so nice and his little sister seems so adorable... Lauren reminds me of me hahaha
Liking the plot already, but i thought maybe to fast about him liking her or whatever, it doesn't matter, keep it up :)
Interesting chapter :) The flow could use some, there were a few times you switched tenses and lacked punctuation but other than that I liked it.