I NEED YOU (Editing)

I NEED YOU (Editing)

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Leslie Malik By _stuDYING_4ever Updated Feb 03

After years of not seeing her mother and twin brother, she's coming back home. After years of being with supernatural beings and fight with them, she comes home to the same enduring pain as before. But this time, she will be part of the supernatural. What will happened when she meets the sourwolf? What will happen when her old friends and ex lovers help them defeat the evil in Beacon Hills? Find out more by adding this to your library:)

  • derekhale
I would try using a wider variety of words instead of just saying said, asked, replied. You can find all kinds of alternatives online! :)
-aestheticauras -aestheticauras Jul 20, 2016
Word of advice, to keep your reader amused, don't write in slang.
TheAngelsAreFalling_ TheAngelsAreFalling_ Jun 17, 2016
This girl is sixteen? Derek should not be prowling after her. 😁