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Cancer Victim (Cancelled. Being re-written)

Cancer Victim (Cancelled. Being re-written)

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Writertobe101 By Writertobe101 Updated Aug 03, 2011

Elisia is a fun-loving girl, who loves to joke around, pull pranks, and drool over hot guys with her friends. But what happens when she finds out she has a rare uncurable cancer? And on her sixteenth birthday no less. And on top of that she has a hot new annoying neighbor. Hmmm. Things could go smoothly for her, and she will live the rest of her life normally, but what fun would that be? Her life is soon to be filled with, lies, worries, health and family issues, love, and even...heartbreak

-enigmatic -enigmatic Jun 25, 2011
So I read the other chapters and it sounds as if you were lagging off. getting lazy. It was getting cliche. Instead of writing the lyrics of the song write she was singing so and so.
anna_marie0408 anna_marie0408 Jun 24, 2011
I mean its nice and all and understanding with Cancer and all...but I can't read it because of my past with cancer...sorry I couldn't help. 
ReginaHall ReginaHall Jun 23, 2011
This is a really unique, interesting and sad story. The only problem I can find is that there a couple of spelling errors (most of them are commonly misspelled so don't worry), but other than that, good job :)
Acorntopper Acorntopper Jun 17, 2011
Very lovely, I quite like it. Blunt in the begginning, but in a good way. Well done, keep at it =)
aleatoire aleatoire Jun 17, 2011
It's a very good and original story line. But please don't be upset or mad but I am opting out of following this story for that sake that cancer is too.... close for me to be friends with it. Oddly put but... yeah. Great story.. :)
LullabyOfLillies LullabyOfLillies Jun 17, 2011
The writing flows well, and I love how you brought the actual meaning of "cancer" to the story. Good job.