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the new girl,dating Destery

the new girl,dating Destery

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cat By mayday_parade Updated Dec 27, 2014

Alice is a normal looking teenage.until her mom decides to move up north.hoping that she'd be with her best friend Adeline,she was happy.she thinks every one is beautiful..even her cat Cheech...except her...she thinks she's dull and ehh. not even knowing the surprises that this new school/life my throw at her....and the one person she least excepts would think she's the most prettiest girl in the world really thinks all..this :D

Kara_writes Kara_writes Aug 20, 2012
I think that maybe you should put the texts in italics -- that way it's easier to see what's a text, and what's not. I have a suggestion with your punctuation and grammar: Run this through a word processor, or something with spell-check, and it will show you where the mistakes have occurred.
MadLove4Destery MadLove4Destery Sep 12, 2011
mayday_parade mayday_parade Mar 30, 2011
@ontheskyline its okay you didn't and by the way thank you...this what i wanted someone to tell me and i fixed it :D