A short poem i wrote....without much thought. so yeah...not really so good iguess...
I enjoyed reading this poem and I could relate to the emotions you were expressing in it. Good job :)
this is an awsume,no epic,poem!!!!i can totaly feel the geloiusy and hurt!!!!you should write more!!!
I do like the first stanza. It unfolds the feeling of jealousy that so often leads to hate. You might enjoy reading my recent poem, What Became of the Blonde? The blonde might have felt that way once I came on the scene.