Not Myself Anymore

Not Myself Anymore

1 Part Story 318 Reads 13 Votes
L.H By Lhafez98 Completed

A short poem i wrote....without much thought. so yeah...not really so good iguess...

sahealey sahealey Dec 15, 2012 11:51AM
I enjoyed reading this poem and I could relate to the emotions you were expressing in it. Good job :)
Dawn_Fire Dawn_Fire Dec 15, 2012 12:54AM
this is an awsume,no epic,poem!!!!i can totaly feel the geloiusy and hurt!!!!you should write more!!!
gailrunschke gailrunschke Dec 14, 2012 02:36PM
I do like the first stanza. It unfolds the feeling of jealousy that so often leads to hate. You might enjoy reading my recent  poem, What Became of the Blonde? The blonde might have felt that way once I came on the scene.