Be My Savior

Be My Savior

560 Reads 26 Votes 5 Part Story
BreakYourHeart By BreakYourHeart Updated Sep 06, 2011

Two will live.  One will die.  Who will be the ones to survive?

BreakYourHeart BreakYourHeart Sep 19, 2011
@K-Ninja Thank you so much for commenting! It means a lot for someone to do that and it makes my day whenever I receive one :) thank you again and I hope you keep enjoying the story! :)
tepidly tepidly Sep 19, 2011
WOW this is AMAZING even if is a teaser!! I LOVE IT!! ur AWESOME!! lolz =-D
BreakYourHeart BreakYourHeart Jul 26, 2011
@Coheed2113 I'm really glad that you like my teaser and am honored for my story to be the first story you've read on here :) you can learn along the way then and I hope you continue to read on :)
Coheed2113 Coheed2113 Jul 26, 2011
This is my first story that I've read on here and I love the teaser :)
                              I enjoy the historical fiction. Don't know much about Asian history but its an intriguing story none-the-less!
Horrorlover45 Horrorlover45 Jul 23, 2011
There are some errors but that can easily be fixed.  I really like how un-cliche this story seems to be though. Can't wait to read on 
yournightmare37 yournightmare37 Jul 23, 2011
I love this even though is just a short little teaser! I can't wait to read more!! :D