Ryder gets kidnapped by a mysterious, but handsome stranger. But when he opens up to her, will she be able to resist his charm?
Also this story seems a bit rushed
And I's should be capitalized to seem a bit more proffesional and not like a text
I think that's just a bit rude I mean I get it it's your book character but stereotyping women like that is terrible woman are beautiful and confidence is increasing but again it's just a book character I'll calm down
Put more detail in explaining everything and slow the story down with a more interesting and less rushed and bit confusing hook