The Hostage

The Hostage

78.7K Reads 1.7K Votes 11 Part Story
Brea Ross By breaisyummy Completed

Ryder gets kidnapped by a mysterious, but handsome stranger. But when he opens up to her, will she be able to resist his charm?

hypnotiz hypnotiz Apr 05
Also this story seems a bit rushed
                              And I's should be capitalized to seem a bit more proffesional and not like a text
hypnotiz hypnotiz Apr 05
I think that's just a bit rude I mean I get it it's your book character but stereotyping women like that is terrible woman are beautiful and confidence is increasing but again it's just a book character I'll calm down
hypnotiz hypnotiz Apr 05
Put more detail in explaining everything and slow the story down with a more interesting and less rushed and bit confusing hook