The Hostage

The Hostage

84.8K Reads 1.9K Votes 11 Part Story
Brea Ross By breaisyummy Completed

Ryder gets kidnapped by a mysterious, but handsome stranger. But when he opens up to her, will she be able to resist his charm?

hypnotiz hypnotiz Apr 05, 2016
Also this story seems a bit rushed
                              And I's should be capitalized to seem a bit more proffesional and not like a text
hypnotiz hypnotiz Apr 05, 2016
I think that's just a bit rude I mean I get it it's your book character but stereotyping women like that is terrible woman are beautiful and confidence is increasing but again it's just a book character I'll calm down
FriendlyDragon478 FriendlyDragon478 17 hours ago
wtf why'd she go up to him?? ain't somebody ever teach u the stranger danger rule??
hypnotiz hypnotiz Apr 05, 2016
Put more detail in explaining everything and slow the story down with a more interesting and less rushed and bit confusing hook