The Hostage

The Hostage

112K Reads 2.7K Votes 11 Part Story
Brea Ross By breaisyummy Completed

Ryder gets kidnapped by a mysterious, but handsome stranger. But when he opens up to her, will she be able to resist his charm?

  • couple
  • love
  • romance
KayFelisdort KayFelisdort Nov 11, 2017
Smart, but it's too late. Maybe running would have helped. But now you're kidnapped
hypnotiz hypnotiz Apr 05, 2016
Also this story seems a bit rushed
                              And I's should be capitalized to seem a bit more proffesional and not like a text
hypnotiz hypnotiz Apr 05, 2016
I think that's just a bit rude I mean I get it it's your book character but stereotyping women like that is terrible woman are beautiful and confidence is increasing but again it's just a book character I'll calm down
FriendlyDragon478 FriendlyDragon478 Jan 17, 2017
wtf why'd she go up to him?? ain't somebody ever teach u the stranger danger rule??
hypnotiz hypnotiz Apr 05, 2016
Put more detail in explaining everything and slow the story down with a more interesting and less rushed and bit confusing hook