soul seeker

soul seeker

823 Reads 23 Votes 9 Part Story
Ruthy By TearsOfAngels Updated Oct 29, 2010

Robin is a tortured soul forever shrouded in guilt, Falcon is fallen but wishing to live a life away from pain and darkness. they love each other, need each other. and even though Falcon terrifies Robin. they still want to be together.

but will they?

tmnprockon tmnprockon Jun 21, 2010
I really want to know what he did.  Like, really.
                              I like how you write like a stream of thoughts.  I find that hard to do, but some people don't.  Anyway, I really like this story :)
TearsOfAngels TearsOfAngels Jun 19, 2010
constructive critisisim encouraged! i need to know my mistakes! ty ty
ieatmangos ieatmangos Jun 08, 2010
OMG.....NICE!!!! IM DIEIN TO FIND OUT WHAT HE IS.....BUT I HAVE A FEELIN HIS A BIRD OR SUMTHING......UPLOAD SOON (:
TearsOfAngels TearsOfAngels Jun 08, 2010
@redtulips1201 im not going to do Falcon's point of veiw because it will give away what he is before i reveal it in an epic and envigorating climax!
                              do you honestly want to spoil that?
redtulips1201 redtulips1201 Jun 08, 2010
really really good!! can you do falcons point of veiw!!! oh and check out my stories if you can!!
                              
                              and  UPDATE SOON
                              AND SEND ME A MESSAGE WHEN YOU DO PLEASE!!!! :)
                              
tmnprockon tmnprockon Jun 07, 2010
This is a really great story.  I really like it.  The only thing I would say is to check your tenses.  Sometimes you switch from past tense to present, back to past.  It's no big deal.  Everyone does it.  (i certainly have, many, many times.)  But definitely continue writing.