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Child of the Wind

Child of the Wind

1.6K Reads 39 Votes 8 Part Story
Abigail By x_canace_x Updated Apr 06, 2012

Genevieve Elizabeth Fallon.  If there were as many stars in the indigo sky as there were times she'd wished things could be different, night would become day and we would all see clearly what goes on in the dead of the shadows.  Hers is a destiny for which many would kill, but one she never wanted.  Born a pariah with astonishing powers and eyes that see what others cannot, her life unravels in front of her as shady characters from her past awaken to play each their deadly part in what will become her future...if she lives to see it.  

I never wanted to be like this.  But do we ever truly get to choose our destiny?

x_canace_x x_canace_x May 21, 2011
@Sakuramiracles Okies.  I''ll fix the comma thing, and thank you so much!!! :D im glad you liked it
x_canace_x x_canace_x May 10, 2011
@trishthewriter Hm.  Okay :) I will keep that in mind.  What exactly do you suggest?  (like what sort of hook) thanks!
TheSnowborn TheSnowborn Apr 04, 2011
Well, I love it. I could actually picture all of this as I read it. Keep it up, voted!
Misz_Unique Misz_Unique Apr 02, 2011
Nice description, leaves a clear image in the readers mind. Good Start
calvin2 calvin2 Apr 01, 2011
Very detailed. Love how it makes me feel the suspense on the story. How the characters truly feel. Just amazing!!
S-Jamess S-Jamess Mar 26, 2011
This is incredible.
                              I love your writing style, its got such an easy flow to it. And i love how powerful this how chapter is. It's as though you can feel what the characters are feeling. amazing descriptions :)