The Voice That Made Me Fall in Love

The Voice That Made Me Fall in Love

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CarrotLuvers4ever By CarrotLuvers4ever Updated Nov 09, 2012

Elizabeth James like any other girl has a dream and one night she sings in a small cafe where she meets Louis Tomlinson. What she doesn't know is that he is hopelessly in love with her but she ignores her little feelings she has because she loves her boyfriend. One night she goes out clubbing with her best friend and finds her boyfriend shacked up with some whore. After she is heartbroken and after a week of crying, being comforted and a few weird dreams something... snaps! She stops singing, distancing herself away from her friends and she sleeps around with random men she picks up at bars and throws them out in the morning. However Louis won't stand for this. Will he save her? Will she ever sing again? Will her life go back to the way it used to be? 

Well you'll just have to read and find out :)

singtomesoftly singtomesoftly Aug 10, 2012
I really like this so far, the title it's self intrigued me.  I also like the very last to lines which make me want to read on!  The only thing that I would recommend is maybe change the spacing in Elizabeth's first POV cause I found it kind of hard to read. Anyways it's a great start!! :)xx