Liam is an ordinary guy. That is, until he starts his new school, far from his home country of England, where he meets the people that turn his life upside down. Life isn't always as it seems, and what appears fictional, often isn't.
It's a nice start but try to not put so many descriptions all at once like u did in the beginning. It kinda bogs down the story but other than that it's good
Nice start!!! I've spotted a few grammar mistakes, but over all REALLY good!! I love the description :D
good start. i love u already for choosing the name Liam as the main characters name!!!!=^-^=
This is immense!! cant wait to read more, Liam sounds really cool :) and i cant wait to find out more about the brown-haired girl xx
@Brodiexx thanks! I uploaded 4 chapters pretty much at once, I wanted to get all the background information done, the START of the potential threat and of course the love interest, before I carried into the main plot. I just want to see how many people think it's worth continuing :)
Heyy, I really like the start of this story! It has really good descritoin, and its not rushed. I love where I think this plot is going, and I cant wait to read more!xx