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Trust Me

Trust Me

327 Reads 8 Votes 3 Part Story
Bethany By CaliforniaGurll Updated Mar 24, 2011

Anna Robertson is always scared.  When she was little, it was clouds and the wind.  Later, she would panic if she was not with an adult at all times.  She doesn't trust anyone, even though she knows they can't hurt her.

Now, Anna is fifteen.  Years of therapy and treatment have finally paid off,  and her OCD seems to be under control.  But an unexpected move throws her whole world into a tailspin, and suddenly she's back to the rocking, shaking little girl she was before.

The last thing Anna wants is to go back to therapy.  But what if she can never learn to trust again?

GenXblogger GenXblogger Mar 24, 2011
If i hadn't read the story description I would have had no idea that so much time had passed and she was now 15, you might want to add  some transition. Other than that, more of the same beautiful writing! 
GenXblogger GenXblogger Mar 24, 2011
I loved the intensity! Very high quality writing! I knew I had done the right thing fanning you ha!! 
CompulsiveWriter CompulsiveWriter Mar 23, 2011
Wow, you captured a lot of emotion - from all parties involved.  Voted!
- - Mar 23, 2011
I liked this. it was very well written. Great job. Adding to my library!