Ready first page it's there :)
Comment what you think about the book :D
sexual content and cursing so please if you do not like that don't read :) x
The cover of the book why does Luke have tattoos? And blue hair???
I think the story has potential and your writing style is good, you just need to slow everything down and spend time on your pre-plot, making sure it feels real, believable and doesn't seem rushed. xx
m one benne MD