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Observer Tales:The Levant (On Hold)

Observer Tales:The Levant (On Hold)

575 Reads 26 Votes 8 Part Story
Jam By jamjar Updated Sep 05, 2011

Samara is part of a secret scociety that travels through time observing important events that happen all over the world. Her Scociety is very strict and have many rules, but one day Samara finds herself falling in love, but by falling in love Samara is breaking one of the most important laws in the Observer Scociety. Will she be caught and taken away from her love for eternity?

RunFree RunFree May 09, 2011
Hiya!
                              Voted.  You have a nice writing style and it's an intriguing start!
                              If you want to take a look at my story Touche I think you'd like it.  I'm very grateful for any feedback and votes I can get.
                              Nice writing!  Keep up the good work.
jamjar jamjar May 07, 2011
235 READS!!!!!!!! yay ! thanx so much for reading guys, i would really like some feed back tho, so i'll be happy to hear any comments. =D