The Kaleid

The Kaleid

16 Part Story 307K Reads 3.9K Votes
DuhILoveYou By DuhILoveYou Completed

Khristoph Marie is a Kaleid and one of the last of her kind. When her best friend and near kin is captured by the Raksha King’s forces, she uses her ability as a realm traveler to serve the prince under the guise of being a male. When boundaries are broken, promises are bound, and love invades duties, Khris finds her world spinning out of control; much like the colors she wields.
    
    The Second Book Begins Here:
     http://www.wattpad.com/story/16504606-the-strike

Ischle Ischle May 20, 2016 09:29AM
I think they were right the first time. It makes sense if you look at it as her having magical powers or something. Regardless, you may want to put a comma after the word 'loose'.
Could you please help me get my story into shape I know you're a good writer this story is living proof of that.
space-hobbits space-hobbits Nov 22, 2015 12:42PM
@DuhILoveYou the double sports bra thing is relatively safe. Wear two sports bras, but one is backwards and slightly smaller. Or something like that. An actual binder is the best way to go, though.
@DuhILoveYou just a binding that wouldn't put too much pressure on her chest like ace bandages do
if you want to press your boobies down you shouldn't use ace bandages because if it's too tight you can break a rip or collapse a lung
Puppylover6543 Puppylover6543 Jan 28, 2015 02:12AM
Ur welcome DuhILoveYou. Wow that just sounds weird doesn't it