Foundation

Foundation

2.6K Reads 21 Votes 1 Part Story
Jasmine By MzTexas95 Updated Mar 22, 2011

PART ONE TO THE FIVE PART STORY OF JACKIE & RYAN 
Jackie going through life is forced to move in with her boyfriend Ryan and her life changes. 


shout out to holley342 for the new cover

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mybrownskin mybrownskin May 26, 2014
Kevin is sure around them a lot for them not to like each other
mybrownskin mybrownskin May 26, 2014
I would have not being hugging that trick after she threw a bottle at my head. or her party
xoovo_kie xoovo_kie Jan 05, 2013
I'm really lost . There seems to be no real story line . Like you just made it up and the imagery is very poor
MzTexas95 MzTexas95 Oct 01, 2011
@VeronicaHayward Thanks for ur honesty lady honestly I wrote this like two yrs ago nd I ddnt edit so I'm going to edit it after I finish my current story thnx again for lOoking at it
VeronicaHayward VeronicaHayward Oct 01, 2011
I tried to read it, u bring in to many characters without the reader connecting to the main. Just work on that & it should be an easy read. My honest
MzTexas95 MzTexas95 Apr 15, 2011
@Beautiful-Lies omg thnx so much ur the first person to actually comment....then again I dnt kno weather 2 trust u b/c ur name is beautiful lies lol no thnx for commenting