Foundation

Foundation

2.5K Reads 21 Votes 1 Part Story
Jasmine By MzTexas95 Updated Mar 22, 2011

PART ONE TO THE FIVE PART STORY OF JACKIE & RYAN 
Jackie going through life is forced to move in with her boyfriend Ryan and her life changes. 


shout out to holley342 for the new cover

mybrownskin mybrownskin May 26, 2014
Kevin is sure around them a lot for them not to like each other
mybrownskin mybrownskin May 26, 2014
I would have not being hugging that trick after she threw a bottle at my head. or her party
xoovo_kie xoovo_kie Jan 05, 2013
I'm really lost . There seems to be no real story line . Like you just made it up and the imagery is very poor
MzTexas95 MzTexas95 Oct 01, 2011
@VeronicaHayward Thanks for ur honesty lady honestly I wrote this like two yrs ago nd I ddnt edit so I'm going to edit it after I finish my current story thnx again for lOoking at it
VeronicaHayward VeronicaHayward Oct 01, 2011
I tried to read it, u bring in to many characters without the reader connecting to the main. Just work on that & it should be an easy read. My honest
MzTexas95 MzTexas95 Apr 15, 2011
@Beautiful-Lies omg thnx so much ur the first person to actually comment....then again I dnt kno weather 2 trust u b/c ur name is beautiful lies lol no thnx for commenting