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Sabrina By TagPanda Updated Mar 22, 2011

You are a liar, You are a deciever, And I was just, A pitiful believer. Poetry.

jhayann024 jhayann024 Nov 04, 2011
gosh...BITTERNESS...pero grabe nakarelate ako sa poem na to..tama nga nmn ..
                              tma ka SanSmercy28 simple words and yet it have a deep emotions
StarlightHaven StarlightHaven Jul 29, 2011
Love it. I like how you ended it with a similar stanza to the one you started it with, it works well and has a nice rhythm :)
_Mercury_ _Mercury_ Jul 28, 2011
Love this :) there's so much realism in how a person can react once someone has betrayed them, and become like the person who hurt them. great job :)
CJeff716 CJeff716 Jul 27, 2011
very good!!! Some of the best poetry relates to the common man/woman.. and this certainly does that.. great poem
dark-angel dark-angel Jul 23, 2011
Kind of reminds me of Beauty and and the Beast (I'm not sure why) but the revenge seems interlinked and it's just amazing...very direct and to the point-makes it seem more effective and filled with anger...well done :D 
lilya159 lilya159 Mar 30, 2011
WOW!!! this poem really touch my heart! love is sometime evil~ and revenge is  is very powerful. I LOVE LOVE this poem!  thank for dedicating to me!