You are a liar, You are a deciever, And I was just, A pitiful believer. Poetry.
gosh...BITTERNESS...pero grabe nakarelate ako sa poem na to..tama nga nmn ..
tma ka SanSmercy28 simple words and yet it have a deep emotions
Love it. I like how you ended it with a similar stanza to the one you started it with, it works well and has a nice rhythm :)
Love this :) there's so much realism in how a person can react once someone has betrayed them, and become like the person who hurt them. great job :)
very good!!! Some of the best poetry relates to the common man/woman.. and this certainly does that.. great poem
Kind of reminds me of Beauty and and the Beast (I'm not sure why) but the revenge seems interlinked and it's just amazing...very direct and to the point-makes it seem more effective and filled with anger...well done :D
WOW!!! this poem really touch my heart! love is sometime evil~ and revenge is is very powerful. I LOVE LOVE this poem! thank for dedicating to me!