My Guardian Archangel

My Guardian Archangel

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Aiyana Bieber(It will happen;) By Angellover13 Updated Apr 12

Ever since I saw you in the mall, I knew who you were. I knew you were following me, trying to keep me safe from whoever else was there for me. Mysterious yet alluring, you were absolute perfection. Any girl could fall in love with you instantly. You had a charm so strong it could make a dead person swoon. You seemed so perfect, but I could see through you. You were so transparent, so strange. I thought I could change you... but, you changed me. I had been sure you were evil. I hated you. But, you protected me. You, my guardian archangel. -Written as a letter from Holland O’Deerie to Seth McCoy-   © Copyright. Aiyana Cail 2012. Not a Justin Bieber Fanfic.

  • angel
  • archangel
  • boy
  • girl
  • god
  • religion
Animaldefender16 Animaldefender16 Oct 18, 2016
interesting ,very interesting *stroking chin with smirk on face*
KathrynZita KathrynZita Jul 08, 2014
i love the way you've written it for the second person. it really connects you to the audience and draws us into the story. great start :)
MaryelizabethShaw MaryelizabethShaw Jan 16, 2013
a very good read that keeps your wondering whats next. congratulations!
je-taime je-taime Dec 24, 2012
the letter is genuine and done with obvious talent! ;) a great start for a book!
Salathiax3 Salathiax3 Nov 28, 2012
original! I love the point of view! Man oh man! Its odd at the begining but its a good odd. I like how she's scared of him but is attracted to him. I cant wait for the next chapter :DD
Angellover13 Angellover13 Nov 27, 2012
@ysabek Yeah I know, I live in the south of the United States, my grammar isn't 100%, I'll look into having it fixed, thank you for the comment.