So she thinks she has it all. Love, popularity, and a great dad. What she doesn't realize is she is keeping a heart-breaking secret, but so is he. She has to tell him before it's too late, but is he ready for it? and will she be ready for his?
Damn this is... Amazing. Im definatly hooked. You better post a steady stream so I can keep reading it.
I liked the opening. It wasn't an incredibly gripping hook, but it shows promiss. I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm eager to follow this story.