Vampire Secrets (Watty Awards)

Vampire Secrets (Watty Awards)

477 Reads 13 Votes 2 Part Story
Scarlett By chasingcitylights Updated Mar 24, 2011

Meet Monica, a new student, a fresh face, finds herself caught between her heart & mind when it comes to the schools bad boy, the hottest guy of the century.. or two. 
Find yourself caught up in this romantic vampire story, filled with love, lust and many surprises. Will Monica keep her friends promise; will she be able to resist Nathanial? And why is it that every time they touch, Monica has unexplained flashbacks of him and another woman? 

And what’s even stranger, this ‘other women’ is the spitting image of her, but blonde? 

This might be cliché', but it's certainly not original!

Beckstar1992 Beckstar1992 Jun 20, 2012
I thoroughly enjoy it. Please write more. Me no like cliffhangers lol. Sorry about the Kurdish attitude. If I could id give puppy eyes.
JustKindaCrazy JustKindaCrazy Apr 03, 2011
I love the mysterious reasoning for the tutor... Although, I feel the Bella Swan reference was unnecessary. This story already has enough of a twilight-feel to it, and mentioning the characters from the book, just makes that worse.
                              But still, great job! :)
JustKindaCrazy JustKindaCrazy Apr 03, 2011
Yeah, there are a few grammar mistakes, but nothing too bad.
                              Other than that, it's pretty good :)
                              I like it.