The Rapunzel Effect

The Rapunzel Effect

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ChocolateCoffee By ChocolateCoffee Completed

"Oh right, you're agoraphobic?" He asked, understanding. I nodded quickly.

"So you've never set foot outside of this penthouse."

"No. Not once since I came here." He sighed and walked to me.

"You have to go out." He said. I shook my head again.

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes! Sorry lady but I need to get down that elevator." 

Rachel La Tere is agoraphobic. She had never left her penthouse at the top of the luxury Castle apartments. With a controlling mother for 10 years, she had learnt to not question things such as why her hair was to never be cut short or why she wasn't allowed to have any pictures of herself. When Kyle comes crashing, literally, into her careful and solitude life, would she finally find out the answers to her secrets? Why her biological mother had died and what truly happened to her father after she was 'adopted'. And why everybody seems to be searching for her?

And what happens when Kyle finds out what happens to people when they help break carefully built secrets apart?

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I looooooooooove this book. And I don't say that a lot. I am very hypocritical on these things sooooo you are an amazing writer Author-chan
Hug_Me_BrothaXD Hug_Me_BrothaXD Mar 12, 2015
Wow this is an amazing first chapter! Ahh it's so good and I absolutely enjoyed it. Quick suggestion, you should break up the huge paragraphs because it would make it easier for your readers :) but I love it
Copeland_IsCALM Copeland_IsCALM Jul 04, 2014
What an amazing first chapter! Just makes me want to keep reading. Great work!
nickypayno nickypayno Jun 29, 2014
Thats scary man, you gotta start to go out sometimes.
                              
                              This is such a unique story! I adore it!