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Life Turn Over- Ulterior motive

Life Turn Over- Ulterior motive

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sharifah shifak By SSBMA1994 Updated May 27, 2011

Zahra is a spoiled brat who lived her live filthy rich. But  her life takes a turn when her father turns bankrupt.Of course she has to deal with gain and loss. she soon have to cope with life, drama, family and friends... unexpected things keep happening to starts to seem interesting. Maybe this bankruptcy isn't so bad after all? She finally decides to give life a chance...

SSBMA1994 SSBMA1994 May 29, 2011
@WhyteRhose Wow, you give the best feedback! seriously! Thanks, I'm not offended in any way, I love them! I'll edit them later on just like you said. Hey, maybe you should be my editor? What do you think ?
SSBMA1994 SSBMA1994 May 29, 2011
@wardatulnina  <I don,t think I'm that good, but...>Ok, thanks. I love your story to by the way =D  
wardatulnina wardatulnina May 29, 2011
Oh! Wow! Really shifak- wonderful terse sentences and descriptions! You write maturedly for your age! Ur character is believable! Hey, keep writing, k? :)
ranareads ranareads May 23, 2011
I like the story and honestly, your grammar isn't even that bad so don't worry about it. :) 
nairxarika nairxarika May 21, 2011
Love Zahara's thoughts going around in the story. You give her character through her thoughts rather than just stating them =) 
SSBMA1994 SSBMA1994 Mar 28, 2011
yay, my first comment! ^_^ I'm overjoyed..thanks..and yes hopefully..