Chasing Pavement

Chasing Pavement

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Capitan Oblivious, at your service By LogicallyIllogical Completed

For all of her life, Lilith has been running. She ran from her imperfect home. She ran from her unloving father. She ran from the feeling that she harbored that begged for comfort. The only problem is that all of this running made her run towards the wrong arms. It caused her to do something that she will forever regret. Shame drawn out by confusion. An innocent mind looking for something to fill that hollow hole she has.

Lilith thought that she had gotten away from everything that had happened to her in Tuscan, Arizona; but apparently not. Her father has moved back to his old house their and is getting re-married. Lilith, the unlucky Lilith, has to attend this wedding from Hell. It's just a week. Anyone can deal with anything for just a week.

It's finally time for her to confront her mistake, to confront her feeling and to understand why. With a road trip, a crap wedding and a step mother with horns; Lilith learns that sometimes you can start over. You just need help sometimes-- say, from an unlikely guy like your best friends big brother. The extremely hot big brother.

YanAii0 YanAii0 Aug 16
ADELE- CHASING PAVEMENTS 
                              Oml I love that song💜 
                              I'll just leave👍
But you can let her go on a plane knowing she's afraid of them. Okay.
DanBea DanBea Mar 06, 2015
The last two sentences reminded me of Mamma Mia, so they made me laugh :)
InvaderGir InvaderGir Mar 19, 2014
Plain as a pickle. I mean unless her hair is a jet, that's cool too.
SiriuslyPink SiriuslyPink Sep 14, 2013
Try to avoid instances where multiple sentences end in the same word. You've got three in a row ending in car. But I like this ;)
Heather126 Heather126 Aug 03, 2013
Read first paragraph: LOVING IT!!! CREATIVE WRITING... I TEND TO RUSH SO THIS IS A GOOD STORY FOR ME!!!