Finding Kara

Finding Kara

1.3K Reads 39 Votes 8 Part Story
Zinx10 By Zinx10 Updated Jul 07, 2011

Ace is the king. Of wild brumbies that is. But when his favourite daughter is taken away he has to save her.
Ace finds himself trapped in the human society wishing to be free. will he ever get home?

Rebbell Rebbell Apr 10, 2013
@Not_so_unique_name Hey, I just noticed he 'through his head in the air and gave a joyful buck' ;D I wonder how that worked...
Rebbell Rebbell Apr 10, 2013
@Not_so_unique_name Haha I'm sorry Brooke.. (but I still think it'd be a good idea to list it as humour :)
elegantly_eccentric elegantly_eccentric Apr 10, 2013
@Rebbell shuddup aha ! I know it sucks :P haven't been bothered to take it down, maybe I should list it as humour ?
ALove4writing ALove4writing Mar 22, 2011
Its good but it reminds me too much of spirit stallion of the cimeron. I was confused at the end. He has a daughter that you didnt mention until the very end.
                               But good job on the story. 
calvin2 calvin2 Mar 22, 2011
I like how you create a scene of suspense with the storm at the beginning. 
Serenade2 Serenade2 Mar 22, 2011
This is a cool story!! :) I like it!
                              I like how the horse has heaps of emotion!
                              ur really talented!