Ace is the king. Of wild brumbies that is. But when his favourite daughter is taken away he has to save her.
Ace finds himself trapped in the human society wishing to be free. will he ever get home?
@Not_so_unique_name Hey, I just noticed he 'through his head in the air and gave a joyful buck' ;D I wonder how that worked...
@Not_so_unique_name Haha I'm sorry Brooke.. (but I still think it'd be a good idea to list it as humour :)
@Rebbell shuddup aha ! I know it sucks :P haven't been bothered to take it down, maybe I should list it as humour ?
Its good but it reminds me too much of spirit stallion of the cimeron. I was confused at the end. He has a daughter that you didnt mention until the very end.
But good job on the story.
I like how you create a scene of suspense with the storm at the beginning.
This is a cool story!! :) I like it!
I like how the horse has heaps of emotion!
ur really talented!