Short story I wrote for school. This was more just to figure out how to use the site, but I hope you enjoy it all the same.

RollingWithTheWaves RollingWithTheWaves Jul 24, 2011
@DanceLikeTheWind XD Thank you!!! Really? :) Hehehe yeah, that's exactly what my english teacher said! XD hehe. Well I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for the feedback! XD xxrach
DanceLikeTheWind DanceLikeTheWind Jul 23, 2011
Wow this is REALLY good!! I think it's my favourite story you've written... :) The giant paragraphs are a bit daunting though... Maybe if you split them up more, people wouldn't run away before getting to the good bit...
RollingWithTheWaves RollingWithTheWaves Jun 12, 2011
really? well shunkya! I'm glad you like it! I really need more feedback about my work, it's frustrating that not many people comment, because comments really help your writing.