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Abusive Love(COMPLETE)

Abusive Love(COMPLETE)

140K Reads 2.9K Votes 28 Part Story
Rachel By rachellache Completed

Jessica and Josh have been in a realtionship for three years. They are so in love. But Josh has a drinking habit. He drinks almost every week. When he drinks, he gets a bit of a temper. For the past three years Jessica has been hit and beaten by her boyfriend whenever he drinks. The thing is, Josh never remembers the next day. Jessica is to afraid to tell him. Will Jessica ever get the courage to tell Josh about his habits before it's to late?

I gotta say it! 😂😂😂
                              MOUTH WIDE OPEN! MOUTH WIDE OPEN! 👄👄👅👅👄 I had too!😂😳😂😅😆😏😂😂😋😎
-txtteddrums -txtteddrums Aug 07, 2014
@xxxbeautifulheart9x agreed I also think it was a little to fast but other than that it's good
swtlovekiss swtlovekiss Jan 26, 2013
pretty good start, just go back and reread there are a few mistakes. The description isn't really there either it just felt rushed. Other than that good job!
swtlovekiss swtlovekiss Jan 26, 2013
ok this is a pretty good prologue. I just say you need to edit because there are a few mistakes or be more descriptive. I just felt like it was jumping around. Overall it was good!
cortness13 cortness13 Jan 03, 2013
Good, a light easy read, a few grammar mistakes, an easy fix, but I have a feeling Josh won't stop...
yeeehaara yeeehaara Dec 31, 2012
Really good!!! You make it easy to read, ie. You keep it interesting which is good :)