Scarf

Scarf

126 Reads 3 Votes 1 Part Story
Elizabeth By elizabeth_96 Updated Mar 21, 2011

I love scarves. No two are ever quite the same. There are silky, business scarves; floral, summer scarves; woolly, winter scarves, and I could go on. It seems that there’s a scarf for every occasion and every personality. Sometimes, I go shopping, specifically for a scarf. But, I never find one, because it seems that the best scarves appear when you least expect them too. 

Jennifer's life seems a lot like she's permanently shopping or scarves. But, in a race to win the best scarves of life, will Jennifer forget who she's shopping against?

PollardWharly PollardWharly Mar 22, 2011
Not bad. Maybe a bit more description. It felt like dialogue nonstop. It would have been good to see a happy medium. Otherwise, very good :)