For Lila, it's all a mystery until she finds out the truth.Finding new friends that help her find it or push her further away and back to the orphanage life. Figuring things out that probably no one else knew...
REALLY GOOD-LOVE THE COVER. DEFFINATELY MY FAVOURITE BOOK ON WATTPAD- KEEP WRITING!
OMG this is so cut love lovelove it! STAY AMAZING KEEP WRITING AND UPOAD! <3 MY FAVOURITE BOOK ON WATTPAD FOR SURE! <3 xxxx
It's quite messy. The dialogue was a bit too much. The characters weren't built very well. But otherwise-with improvement, it was good and will be better. :)
Goood book so far, but you should possibly have a cliff hanger at the end of the chapter, I really liked it and will stayed toned to you. STAY AMAZING
I didn't spot a mistake and the setting so far was describe perfectly. :) Great job for keeping this interesting, voted. :-)
This is very original and very well written! Though I suggest making another part for chapter two so it's more organized, otherwise good job! Oh and watch your spacing too, but good job!