The Missing Piece

The Missing Piece

1 Part Story 207 Reads 10 Votes
heffalump11 By heffalump11 Updated Aug 05, 2012

For Lila, it's all a mystery until she finds out the truth.Finding new friends that help her find it or push her further away and back to the orphanage life. Figuring things out that probably no one else knew...

mounteverest44 mounteverest44 Aug 13, 2012 03:41PM
REALLY GOOD-LOVE THE COVER. DEFFINATELY MY FAVOURITE BOOK ON WATTPAD- KEEP WRITING!
fly1ng54uc3r fly1ng54uc3r Aug 11, 2012 03:48PM
OMG this is so cut love lovelove it! STAY AMAZING KEEP WRITING AND UPOAD! <3 MY FAVOURITE BOOK ON WATTPAD FOR SURE! <3 xxxx
KriziaMillanes KriziaMillanes Aug 08, 2012 09:46AM
It's quite messy. The dialogue was a bit too much. The characters weren't built very well. But otherwise-with improvement, it was good and will be better. :)
krissytheklutz krissytheklutz Aug 07, 2012 10:31PM
Goood book so far, but you should possibly have a cliff hanger at the end of the chapter, I really liked it and will stayed toned to you. STAY AMAZING
brookIynbaby brookIynbaby Aug 07, 2012 10:08PM
I didn't spot a mistake and the setting so far was describe perfectly. :) Great job for keeping this interesting, voted. :-)
Harlum_X Harlum_X Aug 07, 2012 06:13PM
This is very original and very well written! Though I suggest making another part for chapter two so it's more organized, otherwise good job! Oh and watch your spacing too, but good job!