My Dark Knight

My Dark Knight

57 Part Story 8.6M Reads 176K Votes
_imperfect By _imperfect Completed

In the era where swords rule, where women consider their modesty their greatest virtue. Where a man would kill to find his wife warming another mans bed, a time when women would consider it the greatest of adultery or fornication to  warm a bed other than her husbands. A time when an honorable man guards his gaze, for his gaze is solely for his wife alone, as well as his heart. He's  feared, ruthless, cold, heartless, manipulative, cunning, a rake. Or so they assume...  She's beautiful yet silent, not by a defect, she simply dislikes to mingle with gossip.Yet she has emotional scars that no one sees behind her smile, but a few.
Cover by @forcade

Girl_with_WIFI Girl_with_WIFI Jul 09, 2016 01:00AM
Is it just me and my dirty mind or does anyone else think this sounds wrong?
This girl is only ten and shes more wise than most adults 😒
carrieweetot carrieweetot Aug 20, 2016 08:17AM
I'm a gymnast and a dancer so I had to learn to have a perfect posture.... Now it's super uncomfortable for me when I slouch!
SkyRoadBooks SkyRoadBooks Aug 19, 2016 02:03AM
A bit much description. Better to 'show'  than tell. "She brushed her raven locks out of her eyes as she bent over etc. etc.
Shamica89 Shamica89 May 19, 2016 08:57PM
The story  line seems  interesting but the errors are so annoying and somewhat confusing.  Please proof read your material, even though it's a free app always let your work represent   the best  you,  you may never know when opportunity may present itself
The_Blank_Face The_Blank_Face Jun 29, 2016 02:28AM
Can anyone please check out my book, I need someone to tell me if its good or not. If you'd like I could read yours too.