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Jordana Brady By TheUnknownGirl Updated Feb 25, 2013

Hanna Fields is perfect; top of her class, perfect attendance, and has never gotten into any trouble.
Nathan Ryle is new; hot, smart, and the bassist in the popular band Red Flyer. He's finally returned to school after being out of the country with his band for a short vacation.
When Nathan comes to school, everyone know's who he is. Girls fawn over him, and guys get jealous. The only way to change this in his mind, is to find someone to be his girlfriend, and Hanna fits the bill. 
What happens when things don't go as planned? What does Hanna think about this? How will it all end?

xXxWinterxXx xXxWinterxXx Jan 09, 2012
@TheUnknownGirl lol your welcome, an yea that bc there not always right, but hell there close enough:P
                              & no!;)
TheUnknownGirl TheUnknownGirl Jan 09, 2012
@WinterAmethyst Ahh! Thank you so much! (^^)
                              I wish I knew Japanese it seems so cool! Lol, google translate me and that have a love hate relationship, but it helps sometimes :P
                              Thank you very much for commenting (^^)
xXxWinterxXx xXxWinterxXx Jan 08, 2012
1. Your an ah-mazing writer and 2. I <3 Japan. But I only know a couple of words:p(self taught :D)...(with the help of Google translate xP)
TheUnknownGirl TheUnknownGirl Nov 26, 2011
@scattering-memories *sigh* I love Japan, it seems like a dreamland for anime geeks like myself. But more than that, I want to see what the culture's like. Gosh dang expensive air fair....
                              thank you very much for the feedback. I'll try to remember that later on when introducing new characters. :)
xXFightLoveLaughXx xXFightLoveLaughXx Nov 26, 2011
I didn't finish the entire chapter since I had to go somewhere but I'll make this quick. Awesome plot :D
scattering-memories scattering-memories Nov 26, 2011
I love the setting! I've always wanted to go to Japan :D
                              I think your plot is quite unique, simple and sweet.
                              Suggestion: Don't describe the characters so directly. (Blue streaked blond hair, etc.) Maybe get someone else in their POV to describe her. <:
                              Keep up the great work! :D