The Dream Chaser

The Dream Chaser

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Potato By Songless Completed

The final run of the 8th grade is coming up, and Chase hasn't won a single race yet. So he pushes himself even harder, running every day and night. His dream is to run in the Olympics someday, but when his not-so-great older brother is tragically hit by a car and goes into a coma, Chase wonders if this is what God really wants for his life.

critique-critique critique-critique Apr 18, 2011
arfie14:
                              a forward..... This prologue was well written, but it seems to end suddenly, and doesn't really seem like a finished thought. Input on the rest of the story still to come.
                              
                              ~critique-critique
MajaDiana MajaDiana Mar 30, 2011
The prologue is well written, It displays very little of a big story. Good work. :) 
                              
                              It's an important topic you haven chosen. It's important to chase Dreams. This could be big. :)
                              
                              The description of the story is interesting, and makes me want to read further. It's really good.
writer_122 writer_122 Mar 30, 2011
I like how you centered the story about family and God (: Way to stay true to your faith! Your story's good, too.... very descriptive and believable (:
xRadioRebelx xRadioRebelx Mar 28, 2011
@arfie14 No problem & for real? :O That's so cool! & yeah, it's better when the story is a surprise. ;3
Songless Songless Mar 28, 2011
@DianaPena   Thank you! I wrote it because I love running too, I'm the fastest girl in middle school, like my father was, and it sort of relates to my parents a lot too, but I don't want to give the whole story away! :D
xRadioRebelx xRadioRebelx Mar 25, 2011
*VOTED* I like it! I can actually relate to this, since I love running. But haven't done it in the longest time! So, this book sparks my interest! 8)