Wife of the Dark Prince: Book One (ON HOLD)

Wife of the Dark Prince: Book One (ON HOLD)

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Miickala By Kay-KAylalala Updated May 15, 2011

Mihkka Dialza is a tall, curvaciously gorgeous girl...but she does not see herself that way...She sees a plain, un-attractive, too-tall girl that will never find love. That all changes when she meets Miguel Yaldee'az...the love of her life...a vampire....and who she is arranged to marry. He tells her to see her self as he, and everyone else does...a beautiful strng woman...she still doesn't believe him, but he won't stop until she does...They love each ther more than anything in the world, but can their love make it through the bad times to come? Does the love they share that seems s strong have a chink in it's armor? This is a tale of pain, beauty, adration, cobfidence, life, happiness, love....and possibly,..death. Will that be what Mihkka and Miguel's end comes to?

Kay-KAylalala Kay-KAylalala Sep 06, 2010
@RiangelSolas Thank you so much!! Im glad you like it. :) I think you'll enjoy the rest ;)
invidia1134 invidia1134 Sep 06, 2010
hi..
                              
                              i just started reading this and i think that its really cool...
                              
                              im going to read the rest now...
Kay-KAylalala Kay-KAylalala Aug 28, 2010
@lilyflower687 Hahaha thanks! And idk why its just how it usually goes, but i  see what your saying...but think if the guy DIDNT know what would he d when he found out?Guys r more hard headed lol
Just-Nikki Just-Nikki Jul 05, 2010
Work on your paragraphs structure and dialogue.
                              Pretty good start and you are shaping your characters well. great job :)
Kay-KAylalala Kay-KAylalala Jul 05, 2010
@lil_cherry Uh sure ok but only if you promise to continue reading mine l0l
lil_cherry lil_cherry Jul 04, 2010
heyy 
                              check out my story : After my sister's wedding
                              its new i just started it, tell me what you think