Whispers from Beyond

Whispers from Beyond

18K Reads 591 Votes 18 Part Story
Kenneth Logan By KennethLogan Updated Jul 05, 2014

Nick Blane is a paranormal investagatory journalist for a semi-popular tabloid magazine called Beyond Belief. After returning home from an investigation, his brother Steve -who also happens to be his lawyer- informs Nick of a surprising inheritance left to him by their unacquainted late grandfather, Dr. Alexander Holtt. The inheritance? A mansion located near the town of Great Falls, Montana. 

Nick is excited, but Steve is skeptical. Steve has researched Dr. Holtt only to gather little -but questionable- information. The doctor was a genetics researcher for an unknown branch of the government, but after a unexplainable fire destroyed the lab where he worked killing all his colleagues, Dr. Holtt secluded himself in the mansion, never to be seen alive again. Has this discovered last will and testement dropped a fortune in Nick's lap? Or, brought forth a truth that could shake the leaves from his family tree and place Nick in a paranormaly life threatening situation?

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Syrus-Writer Syrus-Writer Nov 29, 2011
I really love this poem. Nice job. I can't really critique that because I know nothing about poetry, so I'll just move on to the chapter =.='
Everlenna Everlenna Nov 26, 2011
I absolutely love that intro. Very descriptive.  And I enjoyed reading that. I am defiantly adding your story to my reading list. Much lovee, BarbzzyAnn. ^_^ And I fanned you.
MsArtemis MsArtemis Nov 16, 2011
Nice intro! Loved it. Clever, and the rhythm was wonderful. I look forward to more of your work. Voted!
Scattered_Roses Scattered_Roses Jul 04, 2011
I love this poem! It is absolutely amazing! This poem definitely got me hooked to continue! :) *Voted
TheUnknown14 TheUnknown14 Jun 26, 2011
I like the way you wrote this chapter...Your writing technic is awesome...Keep it up!!! Voted :)
Claudiaxcf97 Claudiaxcf97 Jun 18, 2011
Wow. Epic poem! It is really imaginative and interesting. I am definately going to read on because it really drew me in. I voted and fanned. Simply awesome. Keep up the good work!